We are a class of Year 2 and Year 3 learners heading into a very exciting phase of digital learning. We currently have 5 ipads in our classroom to use as a learning tool to support our learning.
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Everything composed made a bunch of sense.
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I ain't suggesting your content isn't good., but what if you added
something that makes people want more? I mean "Florence's Oblong" is a little boring.
You could glance at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create news headlines to grab viewers interested. You might add a video or a picture or two to grab people excited about what you've written.
Just my opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier.
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